Daisy Said:

How effective is ecstasy with weight loss? this is for an essay, i'm not a druggie!?

We Answered:

Ok not a good diet as some people have said but i lost 10kg in 2 weeks not good for you at all tho but glad to help with ur research but also it depends on the person also while on ecstasy you dont want to eat all food just seems discusting!!!

Steve Said:

how effective is ecstasy with weight loss? this is for an essay, i'm not a druggie!?

We Answered:

I know a guy who lost 50 lbs in 3 months by taking X 3 times per week and watching what he ate. He also worked out 3 times a week the day after he took X.

Mabel Said:

What protection/prediction/response did L.A have for the Northridge earthquake?

We Answered:

www.wikipedia.org

Sylvia Said:

Please help me to correct this writing task.?

We Answered:

Pham, you have me in a tight spot, my teacher lurks in this forum. Luckily, 70% is a passing grade. Try to follow:

with every people = with people
when they use = when children use
computer will be = computers should be
password which is known = passwords which are known
need to use computer = needing to use the computer
supervision on them. = supervision.
Hence, they can = Hence, the parents can
come to internet = coming to internet
shop to login the = shops to login to the
Therefore they = Therefore the children
and enjoy with = and live with
too if = too, if,
computer or = computer, or
regulated time. = regulated time allowed.
Regulation = Regulations
need to be = needs to be
force = induce
to follow. = to follow them.
coffee shop = coffee shops
will accept = should accept
to come = to use the computers
the customers = the young customers
of age. = of proper age.
With people under = Children under
this age = the proper age
they have = will have
computer is a useful tool = computers are useful tools
adult = adults

Not perfect, but better.

I will suffer punishment from teacher for each mistake.

Sara Said:

Persuasive writing, help!!?

We Answered:

You need to state your purpose in the beginning. Opening with a question is good, but it should only be one question. So something along the lines of: Did you know about half of Americas 1.3 million unplanned pregnancies each year are ended by abortion? (State your position here)
Then you need to state your reasons. Three or more. Typically three is a good number. Some reasons for each side may be.
1) a heartbeat is sign of life 2) Many people who can not have children would love to adopt 3) You must atone for mistakes made. Whatever your reasons may be, decide and state them after your first two sentences. EX. Did you know about half of Americas 1.3 million unplanned pregnancies each year are ended by abortion? (State your position here). It should be illegal to abort a child because ..(State your 3 reasons here).

Then in the next 3 paragraphs expand upon each idea. One idea per paragraph. Your final paragraph should restate your position on abortion. The paper you wrote is too all over the place. It needs to be a very concise paper that supports your position.