Violet Said:

please revise the short paragraph plz its urgent?

We Answered:

Lastly, the benefit of maintaining Quebec in Canada is notable in politics. In 1982, the Official Language (1 )Act, which guarantees for the (2)equal status of the two official languages(3) English and French, in Canada, is approved by Prime Minister Trudeau. This law is meaningful and beneficial for both French(4) and English-Canadians. First,(5) English and French(6) have(7) the equal status within government offices in Montréal(8). This law protects the right(9) of Quebec’s English-speaking minority and French-speaking minorities(10). It encourages(11) provincial governments to offer services in French and English.(12-13 ){This brings Canada multicultural because this law gives non-English speakers opportunity to participate in Canadian society and have the right.} In 1970, Manitoba(14) restored French education(15) system, .(16)and the ministry of Ontario began to teach in French after Trudeau signed. The provinces, then, gradually improved educational and services for Quebecois (l7) See addition and revision suggested.

My revision of final sentence:
The Official Languages Act (1982) is one reason why Canada can claim to be a multi-cultural country.

Match the numbers in the following list with those in your paragraph. I hope this is a satisfactory revision of your work.

1 Languages
2. omit “for the” here; move “for” to follow “status”
3. dash --- before “English and following “French”
4. hyphen here
5. insert “the”
6. insert “language”
7. omit “the”
8. insert “and throughout the province”
9. “right” should be plural “rights” here
10. insert “in other provinces”
11, insert “all”
12-13 from { to } This is a sentence fragment with no verb.
And, I can not determine how to make sense of this piece.
Either revise yourself or omit this fragment.
14. replace “ restored” with “put” here
15. insert “back into its schools”.
16. that leaves your statement about Ontario another fragment. So:
The Ministry of Education in Ontario created a French curriculum for its schools in 1982 after Prime Minister Trudeau signed The Act into law. All other provinces and territories in Canada, then gradually introduced education and government services in both French and English where significant minorities located.

QUESTION: Are you aware that a) New Brunswick is by law the only official bi-lingual Canadian province?
Or of b) the recent controversy within the schools about second-language options in NB?

17. Therefore: my own edit and revision:
. New Brunswick, the only officially bi-lingual province in Canada, today, recently proposed a change in the Ministry of Education second-language curriculum . This change allows for ALL children to receive LATE (grade 5) second-language education; and withdraws the option of EARLY (kindergarten) second-language education. The Education Minister, who favours the change, met with so much parental opposition to the proposed change in the law that its passage is delayed.