Michael Said:

economic homework - are they right?

We Answered:

that is an insanely long question dude. i only read number 1. the answer is c.

Christian Said:

is lorenz high school a scam?

We Answered:

Yes, it's a scam. Any real online diploma program will make you submit transcripts, submit work, and take exams for every class you're missing. It will not guarantee you can be done in less than a few years, much less 15 days for no work. Life experience degrees are worthless.

Jeff Said:

Is it possible for me to do this research paper?

We Answered:

I love Lorenz curve and I think people doing such a piece of job are genius.
There´s only a trivial inconvenient to what you want to do, it´s already done. You can open any dictionary about the Gini index, and that index number has been calculated worldwide. Australia and Finland are described as countries of income equality. I could say that you could go for it but your teachers could allege that your data is not representative.

Harold Said:

Judging by this synopsis, does this sound like an interesting book?

We Answered:

It is interesting, but kind of cartoony. I kept imagining Scooby Doo and Shaggy.

I guess it would all depend on how it is written, though.

Felicia Said:

Read this synopsis, then tell me whether you think this book would be interesting, please?

We Answered:

It's wordy. Get the word count and trim it by at least 25%. It's also got a few minor punctuation goofs, which you'd want to correct. It offers few specifics and tends to deal in vague generalities. The agent or publisher reading this book knows only about the characters and almost nothing about what happens.

Example of wordiness: You wrote 59 words
"Alexander though, is still in love with Livvy. He tries to suppress this, because he has a secret of his own: he is a ghost. But, being the caring selfless guy that Alexander is, he must protect Livvy, as he has a hunch that something isn't right with Stanley, and he plans to find out what and protect Livvy."

One-pass rewrite in 36 words:
"Alexander suppresses his continuing love for Livvy because he has his own secret: he is a ghost. His instincts say something isn’t right with Stanley. Alexander intends to find out what and protect Livvy from it."

I'm not saying the rewrite is good--I find it awkward and vague both--but it's definitely shorter and repeats less. (If he loves her, of course he's caring, for instance.)

Go over it seeking and eliminating redundancy, then add specifics about your plot as you rewrite it.

Remember, many accomplished authors find synopses and queries far harder than the novels they're attempting to sell.

George Said:

lorenz high school real or fake? honestly.?

We Answered:

SCAM. Take the GED where it is legit... and only $80.
You cannot get a high school diploma or GED online. It is unlawful.