Anna Said:

does draco malfoy hate Harry potter because he's a famous wizard?

We Answered:

Wow very detailed. He hates Harry because he's the chosen one and the most famous kid wizard in the world and he dislikes that he came from a family that gave him nothing and Malfoy got everything and had famous parents. Malfoy wants to be the stronger and more famous of the two but unfortunately for him, he is not, and there is also the obvious differences between the two with the rivalry between gryffindors and slytherins

Nelson Said:

How can I get rid of this feeling?

We Answered:

Ha, I did that when I was 13, and I was in the same position as you, private school and all that jazz, but you should really know that social class has nothing to do with your drinking. Anyway, its a thing that everyone does, and you have to learn like this to understand your limits. The fact that you had less than a bottle is miraculous for an alcoholic experiment, and it could have been worse, it could have been cocaine, and you could have done something REALLY stupid while under the influence. I don't know who's been telling you that getting a little merry will in any way affect your career choices, but they are very , very wrong. You only have to look at the most influential people in history. Queen Victoria-opium addict. Edgar Allan Poe, Baudelaire, Toulouse lautrec, Lewis Carrol-all on absinthe half of the time. Beethoven-alcoholic.
You will get over the guilt yourself, and understanding that it was a bit of a dumb thing to to is half the battle. Put it behind you and concentrate on what really matters in life, or go and take out your frustration on your horse, groom him. When I feel like that, I take it all out through the brush, and the more worked up you are, the More he/she will enjoy the massage!
Don't cry your eyes out, you need them to read with, and you will only look puffy anyway. hope this helps.

Olga Said:

What do you think of my writing?

We Answered:

It's a good start, so keep it up. The very beginning is a lot like Twilight began (main character pondering death). Just something to think about. Watch run-on sentences like the one starting 'Our first afternoon at our "home" was horrible' and it's 'I haven't ridden' not 'rode.

No need to mention meeting Steve twice though. Perhaps you could talk about her past as she's riding and thinking of her friends back home. Take out 'Anyway,' it's too casual. Also go into the moment of the horse getting spooked. Right now it happens a little too fast. Then you'd want to talk about how the foot felt when injured. That would be a better place to introduce Steve and describe him. Give it some dialogue too. That would make it more realistic.

What is horse sugar LOL? If that's the horse's name, capitalize it. Same with Mr. Granger. If the Grandma is warning, you could put that in dialogue too. That would help the reader understand the MC's relationship to Grandma and give insight into the character. Also don't say words in sentences back to back like forest. Edit it together. For instance:

'I was in a forest with dark green pine trees and a small creek that ran right through it.'

Watch your comma placement too. 'Surprisingly I didn’t feel tired but very energetic.' 'The butterfly also had...' Take this out 'I know it doesn’t sound like anything unique but, it was' for two reasons. First, saying 'I know' sounds like you're talking to someone which is too casual. Second, it undermines the beauty of how you described it in the first place. Don't make it unimportant. Another repeating word, 'Unlike most butterflies, this one had...' Though, As, girl and also don't need commas after them. The boy was looking now? What does that mean? As who got closer?

Just my thoughts and suggestions you could take or leave. I like it and wonder what's going to happen next. Good luck with it!

Cory Said:

If i enroll late like 10 days before school starts will i start the year a little late?

We Answered:

How can you enroll without being accepted first?

Barry Said:

girly myspace names pls????

We Answered:

tooba!?
your name is adorable!

joobabros's

haha

Angela Said:

what do you think of this Harry Potter essay?

We Answered:

Very good. You used transitional words, adjectives, verbs, nouns, descriptive term and others. Those are the one that the people check the most when evaluating an essay