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Herbert Hoover Middle School

Shawn Said:

please help me with us history?

We Answered:

high tariffs overseas
Too many investors tried to get in on buying the best stocks.
Strong winds and drought created a Dust Bowl.
plains farmers who migrated west to escape the Dust Bowl
There was a drop in the number of marriages and births.
soup kitchens
Herbert Hoover
a wealthy family and elite private schools
The Hoover administration had not solved the country's economic problems
first president to have a press secretary
relief for people in need; recovery for the economy; and reform to prevent future problems
Both provided jobs
TVA and CCC
Social Security
Dictators offered new political systems that promised peace.
Leaders rose to meet the challenges of the times.

Alfredo Said:

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

We Answered:

I would put it like this:

For the past three years Maria has attended Herbert Hoover Middle School. This is her first year at Edison High School. (You could name some of her favorite subjects in school here.) Outside of school, Maria participates in many activities. She swims, plays violin, and used to play soccer and tennis. She really enjoys playing the video game Guitar Hero. Maria also collects stamps and coins. Some of her favorite things include TV, movies and music. (name favorite music and movies/shows)

You could also put the last part this way: Maria has a passion for music, some of her favorite artists are ______. As much as Maria loves listening to music, there are some artists that she dislikes. Maria does not like songs by Hannah Montana/Miley Cyrus. Along with her love of music, Maria also enjoys watching movies and her favorite movie is Dark Knight. Her least favorite movie is High School Musical 2. Some of Maria's favorite foods are _____.

Overall, I think you've got it. It sounds good to me! Your grammar and punctuation are well done. Just be wary of repetition...using the same word too many times. If you are having a problem coming up with different words to use so as not to sound repetitive, you can always go to www.thesaurus.com. GOOD LUCK!!!
btw, I didn't think that HSM2 was a good movie either. I'm 26 and am working toward my Ph.D in college, but I still watch all that kind of stuff. btw,if you need any more help, I'm totally willing to proofread for you. I edit all my friends papers they write for school. I don't mind at all. best wishes and good luck!

Bessie Said:

History help please ........ no haters please?

We Answered:

1. Taxes
2. Too many investors (drove price of stocks down)
3. Strong winds and drought
4. Plains farmers
5. Drops in marriages and births
6. Soup kitchens
7. Hoover
8. Public and Poor
9. Could not solve problems
10. Fireside chats

note: mine are right, vivek's aren't I promise...case in point the dust bowl would not be part of the unit if drought wasnt a factor of the depression

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