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Jose Marti Middle School

Marvin Said:

can anyone read and check my essay for mistakes? PLEASE!?

We Answered:

i would put "and other poverty stricen countrys" and instead of the him/her thing put them and they and you have a run-on sentence "Along with those goals, I want to get married and have a kid so I can educate him/her so that he/she can do something good for humanity"

stop at "educate him/her" period. then put "i hope that they will do something humanitarian."


really good :)

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