Howard Said:

Can you airsoft at a city park?

We Answered:

dont do it this is how people get airsoft banned cause people try to play airsoft in the wrong places but you asked which is good and it should tell some people (idiots) this is why they put our sport in danger (no i dont mean you i mean people who try to rob banks and shoot at cops with them)

Gina Said:

Best Middle School (Murray Hill)?

We Answered:

I went to Mountain View for middle school and I had a bunch of friends that went to Highland that liked it. Highland would probably make an easy transfer

Norman Said:

Is this story well written?

We Answered:

Hm... I like it. Even though there are some grammatical errors and run-ons, as mentioned before, it's very interesting.

However, you may want to add a little more detail. It seems kind of bland, and you don't add sensory images into it. Then again, I guess you don't need to. Also, you should try and not drag it out; unless of course, this is a slow-paced story- then it's fine. Just make sure you're adding something that'll keep the reader's attention, because it's a little boring (not from my personal perspective, because I like your writing style, but most people prefer action/mystery right away. But, it's your story, and it also depends on who this is directed to!).

Overall, I like it. Keep going.

Roy Said:

Homeschooling trouble!?

We Answered:

Have you prepared transcripts or had her tested for grade level? Ask the school board and other local HSers how this has been handled in the past. Good luck!