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Peterson Middle School

Jerry Said:

Don't argue with your wife!!!?

We Answered:

don't forget the crackers

Edward Said:

what year did george peterson die in the festus middle school gym?

We Answered:

july second 2002

he died cause his neck accidentally got tied to this rope during a school play.

100% positive

Joan Said:

Kelsey Peterson fling: Don't you think the boy should be allowed back to school?

We Answered:

Not if he isn't a legal citizen or has a green card-maybe his parents-who probably are trying for a better life I'm sure-should have taught him better-also-are they legal? And yes-throw the book at her! Bunch of idiots! I knew better at that age-

Elizabeth Said:

What do you think of my story?

We Answered:

It's not bad, not bad at all. Your syntax needs a bit of work. The dialogue between Ashley and the narrator could be separated a little bit better. Two minor peeves on my part: what father would sign a note to his daughter with his first name? And the "OMG"...please lose that. In my opinion, text-speak never looks good in a story.
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Jerry Said:

Did you ever have a middle school teacher named Kelsey Peterson?

We Answered:

when I was in middle school, the name Kelsey didn't even exist.

Myrtle Said:

Would you watch my made-up movie?

We Answered:

omg, id so watch it the second it hit thetres,

The...The....maby... na...well...The School Riot? Acceptance? maby something simple that doesnt tell what its about, like Trever Peterson, or just Trever? and the background is a bisexual flag.

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