Samuel Said:

Can someone look at my story?

We Answered:

You did a very good job. Kudos
I've only found 2 things and one questionable

Questionable...8th line "Only the.... I just don't like this sentence.
It seem a bit run-on with to many topics in one sentence.

forgotten word..."I must be the person to come next." the word "be" is missing

change word..."Seeing them compete where I could...." Change "could" to "should". She really thought she SHOULD have been standing up there.

Tara Said:

Want to read an excerpt from the novel I'm working on?

We Answered:

Oooohhhh! Zara likey!

Just fix the general mechanics (grammar, spelling, syntax, etc.) and you'll be set. It sounds quite interesting, actually!

~Zara Sahana

Michelle Said:

what does my dream mean? (sorry it's so long!!!)?

We Answered:

That's a pretty detailed dream you had! However, usually dreams don't mean anything. Everyone time to time runs into strange, confusing dreams that don't make much sense but they sometimes can relate to wants on your mind in reality ( when your awake) It could be something that's going on in your life. Dreams & sleep can help sort out problems while you rest. It's hard to say for sure what your dream means but like I said dreams can get pretty weird an unprofitable. If they bother you in any way talk to someone.

Tommy Said:

What school do u go 2?

We Answered:

Ladue High School St. Louis Mo

Christopher Said:

Where should I live in California? ?

We Answered:

It sounds like a good place for you would be somewhere in the Escondido area in northern San Diego county. relatively cheap (although you are in San Diego county, so keep in mind that cheapness is completely relative here) its about 15 miles away from the ocean (for your surfing requirement) and about 15 miles away from Cleveland National Forest (for your hiking/mountains requirement). The outskirts of the area have a more country-esque feel and the area is generally one of the more ethnically diverse in the county.

Brett Said:

Should I get a German Shepherd or a Great Dane?

We Answered:

So long as you get up and walk a dog in the morning for over 30 minutes (45 would be preferable), and give them interactive toys that you rotact, many large dogs could survive in a flat. However, you will have to walk this dog twice a day for its whole life, and it would also need to be taken out for potty breaks before you go to bed at night, so are you committed to doing this for the next 15 years, because this is how long GSD live. Its not a matter of saying I have 3 hours now, its a matter of saying I have the energy and drive to do this for the next 15 years, rain or shine.

I would recommend the great dane, just because they are more laid back and love hanging around with the family. GSD need more than that, ours follows us all over the garden/house as we do our work, and needs obedience lessons and loads of mental stimulation.
You could also consider a Greyhound. Although greyhounds need exercise, they are actually a dog that loves to curl up and have quiet time at home, so would be happy living in a flat.