Sam Said:

Please check this paragraph?

We Answered:

There are several stages to preparing for a test. You begin the second you start the lesson. Write down everything you think is important and make sure you know what it means, if you have questions then ask a teacher. Make sure you keep everything you get for the lesson; including notes, worksheets, and any quizzes you may have already written. You should look over your papers everyday to make sure you know the material. On the night before the test you should try to get to bed early so you have enough sleep because if you are tired, then you will be falling asleep instead of concentrating on the test. The morning of the test you should try to eat a big breakfast because you don't want to be hungry during a test. During the time before the test, look at your notes just in case you forgot something. If you follow all of these simple stages, you can be almost guaranteed to get a good grade on the test.

As far as grammar and spelling very good - - There were just a couple things I'd recommend to change.
Other things depend on what grade you are in - - if you are above grade 8 you might want to consider dividing that into more paragraphs (it's a lot of info being thrown at the reader) and also changing some sentences so that not as many of them start with the word "you"

Melissa Said:

Help.... please material for teaching writing?

We Answered:

I think it's much too structured. Stick with the writing process. You teach a min-lesson in grammar or spelling at the beginning and take a status of the class (what are they working on, which step of the WP have they reached today--will they be editing, revising, rough drafting, etc.) Give them plenty of in class writing time. And have them keep a portfolio of their work.

Gilbert Said:

A writing activity help?

We Answered:

First of all, the students may or may not understand the background information needed to do the assignment so make sure they understand how to write a story. The reason I say this is because I am a middle school teacher and believe it or not there are still some students who do not know how to write very well.

A really great website that will help you get your three objectives would be:

http://www.educationoasis.com/curriculum/LP/LP_resources/lesson_objectives.htm

Jacob Said:

help.... please material for teaching writing?

We Answered:

How fun!! Sounds great!!! Kids will love it!!! Go for it.

First of all, if you are teaching story writing, your worksheet should have all the elements of story. Include: Characters, setting, problem/solution, story sequence of events, climax, and some dialogue.

Next, I believe this is an activity that could go as low as sixth grade and be successful.

Strengths:
working in groups
collaboration
learning story elements
creativity
freedom of topic

Weaknesses:

Give more paramaters like an example outline and story
demonstrate how you are going to walk around and assist
make sure you keep kids on task in groups

Limitations:

You may have students who do all the work and others sit there

Maybe assign definite parts for each student to be responsible for and then combine all parts for the story

Assist those students who may not be creative and need more help

Objectives:

Teach story elements
Opportunity to work in a group
Completion of a piece of writing from beginning to end
Independent practice with writing creatively
Presenting Stories

Finally, I have done a lesson where I gave each group a paper bag with story element parts, each student out of each group picks a part out of the bag, then play the music, and students must collaborate afterwards to put it all together. I would make them write the story in class. Some may not do their part if they take it home and it will blow it for the whole group.

Julia Said:

What is Spanish 3 like in high school?

We Answered:

spanish 3 is a lot of writing and understanding the language better. we did alot of projects where we had to write scrips and memorize them and perform them. you learn alot of grammar and the correct way to use certain things and then there is always the vocabulary. if you study and listen in class the class will be easy. trust me it is not that hard

Kimberly Said:

Please check this paragraph for any errors?

We Answered:

Did you write this for us to proofread, or was you assignment to correct. I hope you wrote it and not the other, or else SHAME ON YOU for asking us to do your homework.

My corrections:

There are several stages to preparing for a test. You begin the second you start the lesson. Write down everything you think is important and make sure you know what it means, and if you do not, then ask a teacher. Make sure you keep everything you get for the lesson, including notes, worksheets, and any quizzes you might have taken. You should look over your papers every day to make sure you know it. On the night before the test you should try to get to bed early so you have enough sleep, because if you do not, then you will be falling asleep instead of concentrating on the test. The morning of the test you should try to eat a big breakfast because you do not want to be hungry during a test. During the time before the test, look over your notes just in case you forgot something. If you follow all of these simple stages, you can be almost guaranteed to get a good grade on the test.